Sunday, March 21, 2010

Beetey pal


Surkh panno per,

lal syahi Ki likhawat

Chand khushiyan,

Naye sapno Ki chahat

Ankahi baatein,

Chhupe armano Ki Aahat

Unki muhabbat,

Woh dabi Muskurahat

Woh nazarien,

un nazaron ki hichkichahat

Beetey afsaano mein

chand alfazo ki taravaat

tum kya samjhoge ?



6 comments:

Choco said...

Wow...
Wah wah! Wah wah!

Agar itna sab bolne par bhi
Woh nahin samjha
Toh my friend
He is but a dhakkan.

My shayari sucks!
Your words rock! :D

Captcha: ofiscera!!?!!

Thousif Raza said...

ek dum mast poetry hai baba... mast... riddhi... you are really good.. nice hai, mast hai... :)

take care and keep writing.........

NIM said...

Wah Boss! Kya Baat Hai!
Ekdum touching the gooy part of the heart :D :P

blunt edges said...

subhanallah!

read it twice n feel like reading it once more...loved it :D

word of the day: "buret"

Nikita Banerjee said...

My first time here! Brilliant poetry!

Riddhiculuos said...

@choco- why do u shut your blog aise achanak se... :(
hehe and thank you for liking it. he probably is a dhakkan.. hehhee
and 'ofiscera' .. this one is difficult.. hehhe i think it is south indian for 'officer'.. with the exact accent.. 'offiscera offiscera.. lisssunn" :D

@thousif-thank you thank you.. and mast hai kyunki mein bahut vyast hun exams mein. 'vyast reho mast reho'..

@Nim- hahah thank you.. touched :)

@bluntu
subhaanallah..arrey shukria janaab.. 'buret' is ..hmm.. err.. mein lajawaab hun..

@nikita- m glad that u liked it. thanks a tonne. keep coming

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